Revising Your Essay

Click below to view the narrated PowerPoint presentation "Revising Your Essay" as a VIDEO.

NOTE: It has 4 parts, and will take you just over 30 minutes to view all the 4 parts (30 minutes TOTAL, not each). If your computer can't play these videos for you, then you might need to download some video-viewing software. Scroll down towards the bottom of the page to learn more about how to do this.

Now, sit back, relax, and TURN UP YOUR VOLUME!!!

Revising Your Essay Part I

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4ZooT3rFn18

*Note: If the video is taking too long to load from this webpage, click on the above link. You will be directed to the YouTube website where the video will probably load more quickly.

 

Revising Your Essay Part II

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bRZszXYT75E

*Note: If the video is taking too long to load from this webpage, click on the above link. You will be directed to the YouTube website where the video will probably load more quickly.

 

Revising Your Essay Part III

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V_f9Rrj1R_o

*Note: If the video is taking too long to load from this webpage, click on the above link. You will be directed to the YouTube website where the video will probably load more quickly.

 

Revising Your Essay Part IV

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DO1Qc4xZFtk

*Note: If the video is taking too long to load from this webpage, click on the above link. You will be directed to the YouTube website where the video will probably load more quickly.

 

What You Need to View These Videos...

These videos are posted on YouTube.com (I've just connected them to my web-page via YouTube). If you've viewed YouTube videos before, then you'll have no trouble watching the above linked videos. If you have never before used YouTube on your computer, you may want to make sure you have compatible software. Click below to be directed to the YouTube website where you can learn more about online video viewing:

http://help.youtube.com/support/youtube/bin/static.py?page=start.cs&hl=en-US

What to do if you STILL can't view the videos...

If you STILL can't view these videos, even after downloading the software, then perhaps your computer isn't capable of viewing videos at all. If this is the case, perhaps you can go to your school's campus to view the videos, or you can simply read the PowerPoint Slides with my notes (the stuff you'd be hearing me say on the videos) by clicking here.